Luke Harwell
1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes (to add a turning lane on 140th)
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
yes
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
yes
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
yes (relates to my life)
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
yes (chronically)
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
yes
7. Is the writing clear?
yes it all flows nicely
Alec Johnson drew a picture so i am writing on his rough draft what to add
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